It should shake the tracks like a speeding train.
It should rattle the windows like a blizzard.
It should pin down the sky like antennae pulling in cosmic signals from another galaxy
or it should overcrowd the sky like a bell tower that’s been ringing all morning.
When it opens the cellar door, the insects scatter.
If you trap it in a bag, you’d better have a good bag.
If it’s more complicated than a deli sandwich, I’d order a salad.
Grammar is only part of it but it’s a BIG part.